The type looks like it is being weighted down by the W at the top. The pile of text feels a little awkward though i dont understand the message. Unless it is saying you have to chase after your dreams before you get too old to chase them.
This piece does not have much variation in value and thus it is fairly translucent. The piece does not stand out, but rather fades in as a background piece. From afar it appears like pointillism, and effectively creates shape using type .