We all know those tired clichés. It’s time to kill them. Take one of them and turn them on their heads or at least these will hopefully keep the errors out of your writing. If you think of any other way to change them up go right ahead. Happy hunting!
This place is called the Pit. Sadiya grew up off the scraps that these dealers would throw her out of pity or disgust. She learned pick pocketing at six. She completed her first successful scam at eight. Your character is an undercover agent assigned to find her and try to recruit her. How does you character approach her? What are his/her initial thoughts about Sadiya?
I don't want to say the whole cliche, this band is amazing, he's such a good singer blah blah blah. But Tyler Joseph of Twenty One Pilots is the type of guy that writes from the heart, and he writes songs to you. Not for fame or anything but so you will listen and hear what he is trying to say to you through lyrics. He is a truly amazing human being. |-/